Sunset - critiques please....

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3 nights in a row, down to Findhorn bay to catch a sunset.....dedication, or just plain nuts?

Can I get some technical feedback on this pic?

1/4000s, at f/6....

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Cheers
 
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The colours are great but I feel the trees and land should be darker. Maybe spot meter for the sky next time or mess around with it in PS to deepen the colours a little?

Also, it does seem a little funny that the sun is cut off!
 
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I agree with nero, maybe mask off everything along the treeline and below and just reduce brightness & add some contrast to compensate, it just feels a little washed out

James
 
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Flickr appears to be down for a bit (again!)



Thumbnailed, hosted elsewhere :)

I see what you mean. I'll take a wander down (all of 5 minutes away!) tonight, try to improve....

Cheers chaps :) Any more crit. welcome!
 
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