Logo Critique

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"Currently specialising in collection of blood samples from Vets"

Can't quite remember how blood's transported, but does it mean the vans are slightly different from a general courier's van? That kind of speciality may be able to work itself into the logo, giving the image immediately that the company's different. I'm don't know how, but do feel something's been missed.

Oh yes, now you mention that - I think there's been a bit of a failure to capture the brief. I would in no way associate that with blood sample transport - I thought it was for a parcel company....
 
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Oh yes, now you mention that - I think there's been a bit of a failure to capture the brief. I would in no way associate that with blood sample transport - I thought it was for a parcel company....


We currently specialise in that but want to broaden our horizons. Its a pretty small market. And want to head into other areas.
 
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16 looks good online but won't transfer over to something like paper or even the side of a van.

It's a shame the 2 gets lost on 4 and 5, they would transfer well.

I'm liking 15 without the shadow but I'm not too sure on the 'couriers' bit, it's a bit plain. I like your flick on the G which expresses speed or something along those lines, could you possibly add something similar to the couriers word as well?
 
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16 looks good online but won't transfer over to something like paper or even the side of a van.

It's a shame the 2 gets lost on 4 and 5, they would transfer well.

I'm liking 15 without the shadow but I'm not too sure on the 'couriers' bit, it's a bit plain. I like your flick on the G which expresses speed or something along those lines, could you possibly add something similar to the couriers word as well?

I'm glad i asked now because I really like the Envelope.:confused:


I've had t-shirts embroidered before with some pretty intricate designs so the technology is there.



Any ideas guys fire away i can ask them to make adjustments or have a go yourselves.
 
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#2 is the best logo, things like #20 and #16 are not very usable on the longer term.

Stupid shadows etc have no place on a logo.

#13 is usable too.

Were still at the narrow down a concept stage. I can get the shadows etc taken out when i find a decent concept.
 
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I'm glad i asked now because I really like the Envelope.:confused:


I've had t-shirts embroidered before with some pretty intricate designs so the technology is there.



Any ideas guys fire away i can ask them to make adjustments or have a go yourselves.

If you know you have the technology to be able to transfer stuff like shadows then go ahead with it. I think it'll look great if it's done well. The problem is a lot of these companies just don't have decent enough printers for shadows and the likes.

Hope it helps. I always used to enjoy getting critiqued when I used to do this kind of stuff, it helps creativeness!
 
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If you know you have the technology to be able to transfer stuff like shadows then go ahead with it. I think it'll look great if it's done well. The problem is a lot of these companies just don't have decent enough printers for shadows and the likes.

Hope it helps. I always used to enjoy getting critiqued when I used to do this kind of stuff, it helps creativeness!


I agree about the shadows on the embroidery.

I think i may have misled with the title they are Logo's I'm having done for my company not my designs.

So critique away.

I need to nail a good Logo. that i can use on my van that will grab attention on the move and will be decent enough for t-shirts and letterheads etc.
 
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Oh yes, now you mention that - I think there's been a bit of a failure to capture the brief. I would in no way associate that with blood sample transport - I thought it was for a parcel company....


You mean something like this

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